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I think people often forget their identity. Because we live in developed social media generation, so people always try to fit on media. This problem makes problem that who they are.
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Great answer, Rosie! :) I agree that our generation today has forgotten about the value of our true selves because of the influence of social media. :<
~T.Harmony <3
I think people often forget their identity.
>>CORRECT!
Because we live in developed social media generation, so people always try to fit on media.
>> Because we live in a generation that places great emphasis on social media, people do their best to fit to the standards of the media.
This problem makes problem that who they are.
>> This causes an issue with regards to recognizing their own identities.
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