Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, T.Donna.
How was your day?
I had a hectic day and I was totally exhausted.
Every 5th day is our salary day, so I calculated all of the salaries of the staff today.
As you know, there were so many joining and resignation last month.
That\'s why it\'s too hard to calculate all of their salaries.
Of course, the labor office who deals with us always helped me, but it\'s too complex.
In addition, there were many clients, and some of staff made many mistakes on working.
After closing, Dr. [Name] and I went to Il-San city and met a senior doctor who works there.
That old doctor decided to stop his clinic, so he wanted to sell some stuffs to us.
Therefore, we looked around the clinic, but we couldn\'t find any good stuff.
We thought we wasted our time and energy for nothing.
After coming home, I felt so tired, and I felt like a hot soup.
But, as you know, I am on a diet, so I decided not to eat this night.
About my homework, I love a meeting with my friends\' families and our family.
See you.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Dr, [이름]!
Today, I am so glad that the week has come to another closing. It marks the time for us to have other activities. I will have a wedding on Sunday evening and the radio too tomorrow. I can also get exhausted and beat but happy and energized. I hope that you would get the same feeling from your work in the clinic. Soon, I am positive that you will have a better time working in your new clinic location.
In class, he had more than a couple of laughs about some peculiar events that happened to you yesterday. I still hope you had some nice hot soup because you deserved it. Nonetheless, you can still do it today! ^^ I wish for your staff to stay focused and pay attention to their own tasks. That is the reason why they are in your clinic to work and get their actions perfectly. So, your patience is quite admirable.
You are right about the old doctor. If I may give him some benefit of the doubt, perhaps he is unaware of the worth or technology he was trying to sell you. Well, sometimes, we encounter these unexpected and astonishing experiences but we have to stay calm and critical.
As you have said, meeting your family and friends make you happier. Create a chance to do this over the weekend. For your homework, the journal type of exposition best suits you. Congratulations for all the hardwork, dedication, and passion that you put into your work. It is very highly appreciated.
Have a blast this weekend! See you soon.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
How was your day?
>> Correct!
I had a hectic day and I was totally exhausted.
>> Correct!
Every 5th day is our salary day, so I calculated all of the salaries of the staff today.
>> Correct!
As you know, there were so many joining and resignation last month.
>> Correct!
Or: As you know, there were so many joining and resigning last month.
That\'s why it\'s too hard to calculate all of their salaries.
>> Correct!
Of course, the labor office who deals with us always helped me, but it\'s too complex.
>> Correct!
In addition, there were many clients, and some of staff made many mistakes on working.
>> In addition, there were many clients, and some of the staff made many mistakes on their work.
After closing, Dr. [Name] and I went to Il-San city and met a senior doctor who works there.
>> Correct!
That old doctor decided to stop his clinic, so he wanted to sell some stuffs to us.
>> That old doctor decided to stop his clinic, so he wanted to sell some stuff to us.
Therefore, we looked around the clinic, but we couldn\'t find any good stuff.
>> Correct!
We thought we wasted our time and energy for nothing.
>> Correct!
After coming home, I felt so tired, and I felt like a hot soup.
>> After coming home, I felt so tired, and I felt like having a hot soup.
But, as you know, I am on a diet, so I decided not to eat this night.
>> Correct!
About my homework, I love a meeting with my friends\' families and our family.
>> Correct!
See you.
>> Correct!
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