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Hello teacher! I have some writing test in my school. The test’s topic is explain my food. (We already made some food during class) This is a cake shape of my dog. For this cake, I used muffins and chocolates. I added some bananas, green grapes, and kiwis inside a cake. I tried to make a cake look like my dog. Luckily, everyone said my cake is look like a dog. I think my cake is as cute as my dog. This cake is the bast cake among I made it myself. I am proud that I made it better that I thought.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bella!
We\'re going to talk about the meaning of some of the idioms that could be useful here.
I know you tried your best.
That\'s all I could ask for.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Hello teacher!
>> Correct
I have some writing test in my school.
>> I have a writing test in my school.
The test’s topic is explain my food.
>> The topic that was given was about the food I prepared.
(We already made some food during class)
>> We already made food during the class.
This is a cake shape of my dog.
>> This is a cake in the shape of my dog.
For this cake, I used muffins and chocolates.
>> Correct
I added some bananas, green grapes, and kiwis inside a cake.
>> I added some bananas, green grapes, and kiwis inside the cake.
I tried to make a cake look like my dog.
>> I tried to make the cake look like my dog.
Luckily, everyone said my cake is look like a dog.
>> Luckily, everyone said that my cake looked like a dog.
I think my cake is as cute as my dog.
>> I think my cake was as cute as my dog.
This cake is the bast cake among I made it myself.
>> This cake is the best I have ever made.
I am proud that I made it better that I thought.
>> I am proud that it came out better than I thought it would.
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