Homework~~
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In my experienced, we spent very quiet during traditional holidays because everyone has to go to themselves house. So we need to buy some foods before the day. Every shops close the door.
But when we are in usual, we can get a information about parades on TV. There are lot of festivity in a town. If you go there, you can get a enjoyable time.
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Happy Wednesday, [이름]!
I actually know this because most of my students also go to their hometowns during Chuseok and Seollal. They prefer celebrating traditional holidays with their families.
-T. Caitlyn
In my experienced, we spent very quiet during traditional holidays because everyone has to go to themselves house.
>> In my experience, we spent traditional holidays quietly because everyone has to go to their hometowns.
So we need to buy some foods before the day.
>> So we need to buy some food before that day.
Every shops close the door.
>> All shops are closed.
But when we are in usual, we can get a information about parades on TV.
But when we are in usual, we can get a information about parades on TV.
>> But during the usual holidays, we can watch parades on TV.
There are lot of festivity in a town.
>> There are a lot of festivity in town.
If you go there, you can get a enjoyable time.
>> If you go there, you can have an enjoyable time.
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