Homework~~
학생이 쓴 원문
When I see around, everyone has more good characters than me. But I heard lot of bad news on TV. I think there are lots of someone who has a mental illness. Because many people struggle in trouble like educational fervor and economic condition.
Nowadays, I think the most terrible crime is war.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework! I agree with what you\'ve mentioned. War is the worst crime because it kills and injures innocent people.
-T. Caitlyn
When I see around, everyone has more good characters than me. But I heard lot of bad news on TV.
>> When I look around, everyone seems to have better characteristics than me.
But I heard lot of bad news on TV.
>> But I heard a lot of bad news on TV.
I think there are lots of someone who has a mental illness. Because many people struggle in trouble like educational fervor and economic condition.
>> I think there are a lot of people suffering from mental illnesses because they struggle when it comes to education and economic condition.
Nowadays, I think the most terrible crime is war.
>> CORRECT
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