Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think competitive person is good but it’s bad.

>> I think a competitive person is good but also bad.
I think good side is they can grow with competitive. But when they have too much competitive it became bad.

>> I think the good side is they can grow with competitiveness, but when they have are too competitive, it becomes bad.