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학생이 쓴 원문
I think very comfortable thing is sell phone because we can surch anything and i can send messages to friends so it is very comfortable.
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Short but sweet! Nicely done, [이름]. Have a goal in everything that you do, these goals will help you stay motivated to do your best. I placed some alternative sentences here, especially in the 1st item. Overall, you did amazing. Thank you, [이름]!
- Teacher Raven
>> I think it\'s very convenient to have a cell phone.
because we can surch anything and i can send messages to friends
>> Because we can search anything and send messages to friends.
so it is very comfortable.
>> Correct. (just put this line in a separate sentence)
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