Homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
2012.03.15
1) I am a girl.
2) My father is at work.
3) Trixi and Susi are my cats.
4) The hamster is in the cage.
5) I am a painter.
6) My green pencil is on the floor.
7) Emma and Betty are good friends.
8) Are you from Scotland?
9) His sister is seven years old.
10) We are children.
My coworker who work at the library together didn't come to work.
She said to have a stomachache.
She drank yesterday, as far as I know.
That's real the reason why she didn't come to work.
She might have a hangover.
Anyway, I was very busy today.
I had to work even her work.
She mainly work at the circulation desk.
I stood at the cirulation desk all day.
Today, our library was crowded with users.
Every Thuesday, the academy of continuing education students come to class and use the library.
They asked many question about using the library.
They contiually asked to me.
They acted like first time that borned in the library.
Oh my god.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], thank you so much for making your homework..
Job well done my dear! Keep up the good work! And I commend you for a job well done..
Talk to you later my dear..
Teacher Cam^^
1) I am a girl.
>>correct2) My father is at work.
>>correct3) Trixi and Susi are my cats.
>>correct4) The hamster is in the cage.
>>correct5) I am a painter.
>>correct6) My green pencil is on the floor.
>>correct7) Emma and Betty are good friends.
>>correct8) Are you from Scotland?
>>correct10) We are children.>>correctMy coworker who work at the library together didn\'t come to work.
>>My coworker who I work with at the library didn\'t come to work.She said to have a stomachache.
>>She said she has a stomachache.She drank yesterday, as far as I know.
>>correctThat\'s real the reason why she didn\'t come to work.
>>That\'s the real reason why she didn\'t come to work.She might have a hangover.
>>correctAnyway, I was very busy today.
>>correctI had to work even her work.
>>I had to replace her and do her job.She mainly work at the circulation desk.
>>correctI stood at the cirulation desk all day.>>correct
Today, our library was crowded with users.
>>correctEvery Thuesday, the academy of continuing education students come to class and use the library.
>>Every Tuesday, a lot of students come to the class and use the library.They asked many question about using the library.
>>They asked many questions using the library.They contiually asked to me.
>>They continuesly asked me so many things.They acted like first time that borned in the library.
>>They acted like they\'ve just got in the library for the first time.Oh my god.
>>correct
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