Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Please tell me practical ways to reduce garbage pollution?
The company\'s efforts are more important than personal efforts. For example, Eco-friendly packaging, eco-friendly materials should be used.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Emily! You have a good point here. However, I still hope all people will also make an effort to preserve nature.-Faith-
Please tell me practical ways to reduce garbage pollution?>> CORRECT
The company\'s efforts are more important than personal efforts.
>> CORRECT
OR The company\'s efforts are more important than personal ones.
For example, Eco-friendly packaging, eco-friendly materials should be used.
>> For example, eco-friendly packaging and eco-friendly materials should be used.
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