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Of course, I think that eating habits are very important for health. For example, even though children, if they have been eating fast food like french fries and soft drinks. I don\'t think It seem to prolong their life. They can get sick easily.
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Happy Monday, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree with what you\'ve mentioned that\'s why even if they are still kids, they should already be trained in eating healthy foods.
-T. Caitlyn
Of course, I think that eating habits are very important for health.
>> CORRECT
For example, even though children, if they have been eating fast food like french fries and soft drinks. I don\'t think It seem to prolong their life.
>> For example, if children keep having junk food like French fries and soft drinks, I don\'t think they can live a long life.
They can get sick easily.
>> CORRECT
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