Homework~~
학생이 쓴 원문
Sometimes, my students are asking to me that why do I have to learn English. \" I am not going to go abroad and I don\'t want to get foreign friends in Korea. So Learning English is not necessary for me.\" So then I understand because learning foreign language is very difficult to me, too. But the subject that is in school affect their future like getting a job. And make sure If the company is not required how your foreign language skill, your can\'t be earn enough money and It is likely to except a good opportunity to live in another country in terms of business trip.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree. Some people really think that we should only learn a foreign language if our goal is to go to another country. However, it is also important to remember that learning something new can increase one\'s knowledge and opportunities as well.
-T. Caitlyn
Sometimes, my students are asking to me that why do I have to learn English.
>> Sometimes, my students ask me why I have to learn English.
\" I am not going to go abroad and I don\'t want to get foreign friends in Korea. So Learning English is not necessary for me.\"
>> CORRECT
So then I understand because learning foreign language is very difficult to me, too.
>> So then I understand because learning a foreign language is very difficult for me, too.
But the subject that is in school affect their future like getting a job.
>> But the subject in school affects their future like getting a job.
And make sure If the company is not required how your foreign language skill, your can\'t be earn enough money and It is likely to except a good opportunity to live in another country in terms of business trip.
>> And if the company does not require a foreign language skill, you can\'t earn enough money and can\'t expect to have good opportunities like living in another country or going on a business trip.
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