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How can you help someone quit smoking?
I will notice to smoker it is harmful and negative. And I will recommend quit smoking program in my country.
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You are right, Emily. Professional help is a must. Keep yourself healthy!-Faith-
How can you help someone quit smoking?>> CORRECT
I will notice to smoker it is harmful and negative. And I will recommend quit smoking program in my country.
>> I will inform the smoker that it is harmful and can cause negative effects on our bodies.
And I will recommend quit smoking program in my country.
>> Also, I will recommend a program about quitting smoking in my country.
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