homework
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Who is with you most of the time? Why?
:I spend the most time with my best friend. Because he lives in the same apartment and is the closest friend in his class
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Your health benefits from having good companions. Friends can help you enjoy happy occasions and offer support during difficult times. Friends provide you the ability to provide much-needed company as well as prevent isolation and loneliness.
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I spend the most time with my best friend. Because he lives in the same apartment and is the closest friend in his class
>>> I spend most of my time with my best friend because we live in the same apartment and he is my closest friend at school.
>>> OR: Due to the fact that we share an apartment and are each other\'s closest friends in school, I spend the most of my time with my best friend.
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