Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Ms. [Name]!
It's Friday today and I'm continued busy during yesterday.
And the homework is difficult, too!
Anyway, here is my homework!
1. a) Spending way too much money on his old car, Fred's salary just wasn't enough.
2. a) To become a respected politician, one must administer campaign funds carefully.
3. a) I like to listen to rock music doing my homework.
4. a) The soccer team only won four games in the last three years.
5. a) The children were delighted by the monkeys swinging wildly through the trees.
Why every anwsered are all a)? It's not clean myslef!
Anyway thank you so much!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Sir Steve!
Happy Friday! Thank you for your composition today. You\'re busy again, but you still did your homework. You are really diligent! Keep up the good work! Take care and have a great day! I\'ll talk with you later.
T. JanE ^^
Hello, Ms. [Name]!>> Correct.It\'s Friday today and I\'m continued busy during yesterday.>> It\'s Friday today and I\'ve been busy since yesterday.And the homework is difficult, too!>> Correct.Anyway, here is my homework!>> Correct.1. a) Spending way too much money on his old car, Fred\'s salary just wasn\'t enough.>> b) Spending way too much money on his old car, Fred soon found he\'d used up his salary.2. a) To become a respected politician, one must administer campaign funds carefully.>> Correct.3. a) I like to listen to rock music doing my homework.>> b) I like to listen to rock music while I do my homework.4. a) The soccer team only won four games in the last three years.>> b) The soccer team won only four games in the last three years.5. a) The children were delighted by the monkeys swinging wildly through the trees.>> Correct.Why every anwsered are all a)? It\'s not clean myslef!>> Why are most answers A? It isn\'t clear to me.Anyway thank you so much!
>> Correct.
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