Homework~~
학생이 쓴 원문
Is there a difference between being thin and being healthy? Which one is better?
We often meet many people. But I don\'t find people who look like healthy. Because I guess they look old and chubby. when I watch movies or Youtube channel, I can find a lot of very gorgeous women and men. They basically have thin body, brown skin and strong muscles. Also They look like they are confident of their living. And they know how to wear good clothes whenever they are. So for living healthy, we have to try to keep going to get thin body.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree! We cannot easily see whose healthy or not just basing it from their body structure because there are different factors we need to consider to be able to consider someone as healthy.
- T. Caitlyn
We often meet many people. But I don\'t find people who look like healthy. Because I guess they look old and chubby.
>> We often meet many people but it\'s hard to tell if they are healthy or not because I guess, they look old or chubby.
when I watch movies or Youtube channel, I can find a lot of very gorgeous women and men.
>> When I watch movies or YouTube videos, I can find a lot of very gorgeous women and men.
They basically have thin body, brown skin and strong muscles.
>> They basically have thin bodies, brown skin, and strong muscles.
Also They look like they are confident of their living.
>> Also, they look like they are living confidently.
And they know how to wear good clothes whenever they are.
>> They know how to wear good clothes every time.
So for living healthy, we have to try to keep going to get thin body.
>> So if we want to live healthily, we have to try to keep on going to get a fit body.
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