homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, T.Donna.
It\'s night, but I am still in my clinic, because of many works about the clinic and the building.
Literally, time flies today.
Fortunately, the usage acceptance of the building was done.
That fact made us so happy.
However, there are lots of homework.
Even though the builing passed the acceptance, the defects of it remained.
We requested the correction of those to the building company many times, but they didn\'t seem to be willing to do that.
Besides, there has been a strike by truck owners.
We can\'t avoid the delay of interior construction.
We have enough time, though.
I met many people of many companies; internet, security, and telephone.
Of course, I saw my patients in same time.
Can you imagine?
My brain worked very hard as if it is a super computer.
Now, I am almost done with today\'s work, and I feel very good.
About homework, I am an average human, so I think that it is necessary to use animals in medical experiments for human health.
I got to go.
See you.
강사 첨삭
Good morning once again, Dr. [이름]!
You were superhuman yesterday! If you realize, when good things happen, it seems like we do not get tired at all and we even get more energy from our success and the positive happening around us. Yesterday, you were in this kind of state. So, I wish you more of these experiences since you have been working so hard to accomplish big things for your clinic. You see, when this energy spreads to your people, definitely, they will feel successful as well and work more effectively. Anyway, pray that all the odds of the truck driver strike and many other adversities will be working well for your advantage.
Today, I expect your schedule to be packed again but I am so grateful that you composed your homework belowwith very high frequency of correct sentences, way to go! As you can see, there are only three sentences to study.
I will keep it short for now and I expect a more action-packed discussion from you in class tomorrow.
Seize the day!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
It\'s night, but I am still in my clinic, because of many works about the clinic and the building.
>> It\'s late at night, but I am still in my clinic, because of many work about the clinic and the building.
Literally, time flies today.
>> Correct!
Fortunately, the usage acceptance of the building was done.
>> Correct!
That fact made us so happy.
>> Correct!
However, there are lots of homework.
>> Correct!
Even though the builing passed the acceptance, the defects of it remained.
>> Correct!
Or: Even though the builing passed the acceptance, its defects remained.
We requested the correction of those to the building company many times, but they didn\'t seem to be willing to do that.
>> Correct!
Besides, there has been a strike by truck owners.
>> Correct!
We can\'t avoid the delay of interior construction.
>> Correct!
We have enough time, though.
>> Correct!
I met many people of many companies; internet, security, and telephone.
>> Correct!
Of course, I saw my patients in same time.
>> Of course, I saw my patients at the same time.
Can you imagine?
Can you imagine?
>> Correct!
My brain worked very hard as if it is a super computer.
>> Correct!
Now, I am almost done with today\'s work, and I feel very good.
>> Correct!
About homework, I am an average human, so I think that it is necessary to use animals in medical experiments for human health.
>> Correct!
I got to go.
>> Correct!
See you.
>> Correct!
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