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What kind of improvement do you still desire for the internet connection in your country?
I think countryside internet connection have to improve. Sometimes when I out of town, internet connection is disconnected.
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Hello, Emily! We seem to have the same concern. It is also hard to find a good reception in our country especially in rural areas.-Faith-
What kind of improvement do you still desire for the internet connection in your country?>> CORRECT
I think countryside internet connection have to improve.
>> I think the internet connection in the countryside has to improve.
Sometimes when I out of town, internet connection is disconnected.
>> Sometimes, when I go out of town, the internet is disconnected.
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