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I went to a Japanese restaurant for a long time ago. Many people were waiting for a main dish. I was embarrassed with the strange food. The fish\'s head lived but its body was bone.
And the fish often cried. They just ate the food with talking each other. But I could haven\'t eaten moving fish anymore.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing with me your experience regarding strange food. It is really shocking and cruel to see such food being served especially since the fish is still alive.
- T. Caitlyn
I went to a Japanese restaurant for a long time ago.
>> I went to a Japanese restaurant a long time ago.
Many people were waiting for a main dish.
>> Many people were waiting for the main dish.
I was embarrassed with the strange food.
>> I was shocked by the strange food.
The fish\'s head lived but its body was bone. And the fish often cried.
>> The fish\'s head is alive but its body is just bones and the fish often cried.
They just ate the food with talking each other. But I could haven\'t eaten moving fish anymore.
>> They just ate the food while talking with each other but I couldn\'t eat the moving fish.
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