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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! I had day off after getting vaccination today. I was not feeling well but I felt relaxed after a long time. Why goals are not important in life effective in becoming successful. I think that in order to achieve one\'s dreams, we have to have goals and that time is definitely shortened.
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Hey, William. Thank you for checking out the homework and sharing your thoughts on the topic. I hope you keep feeling better. I\'ll talk to you tomorrow. Have a good night. ~Jane c\",)
I had day off after getting vaccination today.
>> I had a day off after getting a vaccination today.
I was not feeling well but I felt relaxed after a long time.
>> CORRECT =)
Why goals are not important in life effective in becoming successful.
>> Goals are important in life to become successful.
I think that in order to achieve one\'s dreams, we have to have goals and that time is definitely shortened.
>> CORRECT =)
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