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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! It is finally Friday. I have been having hard time since last Monday. So I am feeling happy now.
Why not? I agree that facing challenges absolutely improves a person. Because, no one can grow without some challenges. But, someone who try to effort for making good results, they should be going through difficult time while they make an effort to do.
강사 첨삭
TGIF, William. I\'m excited about the weekend as well. I am happy for you that you can finally take a rest after a long and difficult week. I hope you enjoy the weekend with your family. Cheers! ~Jane (>\'-\')>
Why not?
>> CORRECT =)
I agree that facing challenges absolutely improves a person.
>> CORRECT =)
Because, no one can grow without some challenges.
>> Because no one can grow without some challenges.
But, someone who try to effort for making good results, they should be going through difficult time while they make an effort to do.
>> But, someone who tries to make an effort to get good results should be going through a difficult time while they make an effort to do it.
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