Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! It is wonderful Saturday night. In my opinion, I do not wish that my country has another language instead of the present one. Because the language is the most important a factor to keep national identity. But, of course, learning another language is definitely good way to extend relationship with all people of the world. In conclusion, it is good to learn new things including language and culture.
강사 첨삭
Hey, William. You did a great job with the homework. I appreciate you making the time and effort to do the homework. I hope had a great weekend. I\'ll talk to you soon. ~Jane ^^
It is wonderful Saturday night.
>> It is A wonderful Saturday night.
In my opinion, I do not wish that my country has another language instead of the present one.
>> CORRECT =)
Because the language is the most important a factor to keep national identity.
>> Because language is the most important factor in keeping our national identity.
But, of course, learning another language is definitely good way to extend relationship with all people of the world.
>> But, of course, learning another language is definitely a good way to extend relationships with all people of the world.
In conclusion, it is good to learn new things including language and culture.
>> CORRECT =)
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