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What is your dream luxury car?
Nowadays, I want to change car. If I am rich, I will buy big and expensive car. For example, Mercedes-benz or BMW. But I will effort and buy Benz within a few years.
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Hi, Emily! I admire your optimism and discipline that if we need something, we need to work hard for it.-Faith-
What is your dream luxury car?>> CORRECT
Nowadays, I want to change car.
Nowadays, I want to change car.
>> Nowadays, I want to change my car.
If I am rich, I will buy big and expensive car.
>> If I were rich, I would buy a big and expensive car.
For example, Mercedes-benz or BMW.
>> For example, Mercedes-Benz or BMW.
But I will effort and buy Benz within a few years.
>> However, I will make an effort and buy Benz within a few years.
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