homework
학생이 쓴 원문
MY PLANS FOR WINTER VACATION.
1.Finishing up to 4th grade math.
2.Going to piano academy.
3.Doing thif class.
4.Doing feedback.
5.Going to thailand.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I think this is your longest composition yet.
Thank you for giving it your best.
I expect more from you next week.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
MY PLANS FOR WINTER VACATION.
>> Correct
1.Finishing up to 4th grade math.
1.Finishing up to 4th grade math.
>> Correct
2.Going to piano academy.
2.Going to piano academy.
>> Correct
3.Doing thif class.
3.Doing thif class.
>> 3.Attending this class.
4.Doing feedback.
4.Doing feedback.
>> 4. Doing my homework.
5.Going to thailand.
5.Going to thailand.
>> 5.Going to Thailand.
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