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2022-12-19 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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What kind of sport would you like to try and why? Someday, I will learn fitness. I have never learn fitness. My colleagues are work out. Mainly they are learning fitness. So, I am [Name] in fitness.

강사 첨삭

You are doing good, Emily! Now that you have started going to the gym to work out, I am sure that you will learn all those fitness training methods.-Faith-
What kind of sport would you like to try and why?
>> CORRECT
Someday, I will learn fitness. 
>> Someday, I will learn fitness training methods. 
I have never learn fitness. 
>> I have never learned it. 
My colleagues are work out. 
>> My colleagues work out. 
Mainly they are learning fitness. So, I am [Name] in fitness.
>> Mainly they are learning fitness methods, so I am [Name] in fitness.

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