Homework
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What techniques can you think of that may help an addicted gambler quit?
I will recommend hospital treatment. I think they are patient. So, they can\'t quit gamble without treatment.
강사 첨삭
I could not agree more, Emily. Although other people may criticize us, it is still important to ask help from experts. We should not be afraid of asking help. -Faith-
What techniques can you think of that may help an addicted gambler quit?>> CORRECT
I will recommend hospital treatment.
>> CORRECT
OR I will strongly suggest to seek professional help.
I think they are patient. So, they can\'t quit gamble without treatment.
>> I think they are patients, so they cannot quit gambling without proper treatment.
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