Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think inviting others to my place means getting closer to them.
When someone invite me,
I feel thanksful and I can guess their taste.
Showing my house is that I don’t have nothing to hide.
So inviting someone is very special event
to each other.
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]ny!
Allow me to appreciate your diligence to do you homework.
I guess having someone visits your house is a good sign of having a good relationship with others. Kindly check the suggested sentences below for the improvement of your sentence construction.
See you in class.
Aki~
I think inviting others to my place means getting closer to them.
>>> CORRECT!
When someone invite me,
When someone invite me,
>>> When someone invites me.
I feel thanksful and I can guess their taste.
I feel thanksful and I can guess their taste.
>>> I feel thankful and that makes me know their preferences.
Showing my house is that I don’t have nothing to hide.
Showing my house is that I don’t have nothing to hide.
>>> CORRECT!
So inviting someone is very special event to each other
So inviting someone is very special event to each other
>>> So inviting someone is a very special event that we share together.
>>> So inviting someone is a very special event that we can share with other people.
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