Homework
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How can your country resolve the traffic jam issue?
I think if improve public transportation, some traffic jams will resolve. For example, increase the number of buses and subways.
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That is on point, Emily! Let us hope that they can carry out their plans for the traffic in your country.-Faith-
How can your country resolve the traffic jam issue?>> CORRECT
I think if improve public transportation, some traffic jams will resolve.
>> I think if public transportation improves, some traffic jams will be resolved.
For example, increase the number of buses and subways.
>> CORRECT
OR For instance, they should deploy more buses and subways.
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