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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! I have been getting many things since first day of this year. I planned a lot of goals but everything is not successful for me. I knew that what is the most problem! I think I always make mistakes like a squirrel spinning. I will decide it again. I want to live for enjoyment life so that I haven\'t make same mistakes. Best for luck for 2023!
강사 첨삭
Happy New Year, William! I feel your sincerity coming out of your words and I do wish you all the best for 2023. You have inspired me to stay positive even during difficult times and I appreciate you for that. I wish you and your family good health and prosperity this coming year. Have a good night. ~Jane ^__^
I have been getting many things since first day of this year.
>> I have been getting many things since the first day of this year.
I planned a lot of goals but everything is not successful for me.
>> CORRECT =)
OR >> I made a lot of goals but everything did not go well for me.
I knew that what is the most problem!
>> I knew what the problem was.
I think I always make mistakes like a squirrel spinning.
>> CORRECT =)
I will decide it again.
>> I will make a decision on it again.
I want to live for enjoyment life so that I haven\'t make same mistakes.
>> I want to enjoy my life so that I do not make the same mistakes.
Best for luck for 2023!
>> Best of luck for 2023!
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