Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello.
Maybe you are sleeping now.
Because I took a nap, I am not sleepy at all.
To work harder tomorrow (I mean Monday), I have to sleep and recharge.
Thus, I will try to sleep after this assignment.
Last Saturday, Dr. [Name] joined the work after a long time.
I am not sure that you can understand my feeling.
I was so comfortable with my work, but I also was very tired.
That\'s because I had a high tension for almost 2 weeks, my fatigue came to me suddenly.
We visited our new building and we saw the interior work going on smoothly.
As you know that, last Sunday was New year\'s day.
My wife prepared a traditional soup \"Ddeok gook\".
That food consisted of Ddeok, meat, and Mandu.
We Koreans usually eat that food on New year\'s day, and we say
\"we can get an age after eating the soup\".
I don\'t know why.
After breakfast, we went to the church, and after the worship, we ate another \"Ddeok gook\" there for our lunch.
The best memorable event in 2022 was the vacation in Hawaii, I think.
See you.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Doctor [이름]!
I also took a long nap yesterday since it rained and I couldn\'t do my laundry. It feels great to take a nap, however, it\'s a problem falling asleep in the evening. Nevertheless, we need it. I am sure you are super charged for this new week.
Your workload was probably doubled when Doctor MJ was no around. This may be the reason why you were exhausted for a couple of weeks. Some good soup to welcome the New Year is needed to celebrate a life added to our lives.
Meanwhilel, having soup is a grat idea for the new year since it\'s stone cold. Now that you are a year older, I wish you more success and glorious in your career!
I agree that Hawaii is one for the books! Are you going back there someday? Well...
See you then!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Maybe you are sleeping now.
>> Correct!
Because I took a nap, I am not sleepy at all.
>> Correct!
To work harder tomorrow (I mean Monday), I have to sleep and recharge.
>> Correct!
Thus, I will try to sleep after this assignment.
>> Correct!
Last Saturday, Dr. [Name] joined the work after a long time.
>> Correct!
I am not sure that you can understand my feeling.
>> Correct!
I was so comfortable with my work, but I also was very tired.
>> Correct!
That\'s because I had a high tension for almost 2 weeks, my fatigue came to me suddenly.
That\'s because I had a high tension for almost 2 weeks, my fatigue came to me suddenly.
>> Correct!
We visited our new building and we saw the interior work going on smoothly.
>> Correct!
As you know that, last Sunday was New year\'s day.
>> Correct!
Or: As you know it, last Sunday was New Year\'s day.
My wife prepared a traditional soup \"Ddeok gook\".
My wife prepared a traditional soup \"Ddeok gook\".
>> Correct!
That food consisted of Ddeok, meat, and Mandu.
>> Correct!
We Koreans usually eat that food on New year\'s day, and we say \"we can get an age after eating the soup\".
>> We Koreans usually (have/ serve) that food on New Year\'s day, and we say \"we can get a year older after eating the soup\".
I don\'t know why.
>> Correct!
After breakfast, we went to the church, and after the worship, we ate another \"Ddeok gook\" there for our lunch.
>> Correct!
The best memorable event in 2022 was the vacation in Hawaii, I think.
>> The most memorable event in 2022 was the vacation in Hawaii, I think.
See you.
>> Correct!
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