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Hello teacher, I depend on your co-operation. My answer is : If i choose bus, body is very hard, but as much i will do more experience. If i choose airplance, body is very comfortable, but airfare is very cheap. And if i choose airplance, i will only see sky.
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Hello there my dear Lisa!
Thank you for a splendid answer. Please continue to be an active student. I really appreciate your preparedness for our class. I will a;ways be willing to help you in your needs in learning the English language. See you later! Happy Tuesday morning!
~Teacher Lorraine~ ^^,
Hello teacher, I depend on your co-operation.
>> Correct! Wonderful! :)
My answer is :
>> Correct!
If i choose bus, body is very hard, but as much i will do more experience.
>> If I will choose to ride in a bus, my body will get exhausted although I can see more scenic views and gain more experience.
If i choose airplance, body is very comfortable, but airfare is very cheap.
>> If I will choose to ride in an airplane, my body will be more comfortable and the air fare is very cheap.
And if i choose airplance, i will only see sky.
>> On the other hand, I will only see the sky.
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