homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Would you like to travel to outer space? Why or why not?
:I don\'t really want to travel in space. Because it\'s realistic, but the universe is too dangerous. I don\'t know where to float and get lost.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jordan,
Thank you for submitting your homework.
I had modified your sentences a bit to make them clearer. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
I don\'t really want to travel in space. Because it\'s realistic, but the universe is too dangerous. I don\'t know where to float and get lost.
>> I don\'t really want to travel to space because, in reality, the universe is too dangerous. I don\'t know where to float, and I might get lost.
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