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Hi there! My holidays were most typical. But 5 years ago I had a special vacation with my family. I traveled at Peru for 3 weeks these are so special on a scale of one to ten, that is a plus twenty. Because I am not able to get long holidays while I work in Navy.
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Hey, William! Too bad all things must come to an end like your vacation^^ I\'m glad at least you got to enjoy your vacation. Have a nice night. ~Jane ^___^
My holidays were most typical.
>> CORRECT =)
But 5 years ago I had a special vacation with my family.
>> CORRECT =)
I traveled at Peru for 3 weeks these are so special on a scale of one to ten, that is a plus twenty.
>> I traveled to Peru for 3 weeks these are so special on a scale of one to ten, that is a plus twenty.
Because I am not able to get long holidays while I work in Navy.
>> Because I am not able to get long holidays while I work in the Navy.
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