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What punishment is appropriate and effective for young people?
I think punishment have to equal for every people. In Korea, punishment is tolerant for young people.
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Thank you, Emily! Let us still be hopeful that someday your government can make effective policies to correct young people\'s misbehavior. -Faith-
What punishment is appropriate and effective for young people?>> CORRECT
I think punishment have to equal for every people.
>> I think punishment has to be equal to every person.
In Korea, punishment is tolerant for young people.
>> In Korea, punishment is tolerant of young people.
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