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2023-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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What is healthier: eating good food or getting lots of exercises? :Of course, it is good to do both, but I think it is better to do healthy exercise if I choose one.Because healthy food is eaten naturally in everyday life, but I think healthy exercise is better because exercise is done by one\'s own will.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jordan,

Great job in making your answer to my question!

I appreciate it. ^^

~ Teacher Gina

Of course, it is good to do both, but I think it is better to do healthy exercise if I choose one. Because healthy food is eaten naturally in everyday life, but I think healthy exercise is better because exercise is done by one\'s own will.

>> CORRECT.

>> Or: Of course, it is good to do both, but it is better to do healthy exercise if I choose one because healthy food is eaten naturally in everyday life, while healthy exercise is better because one\'s own will does it.

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