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2023-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jhozel

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1. Do you prefer to have many friends or just a few that you are close to? I prefer to have just a few friends becase communication with many firends is tired. 2. What are the latest trends in your country? IN KOREA, handmade hamburger is the latest trend. 3. What’s the latest news? The latest topic is the decrease of apartment price.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Dan!
Great! Thanks for answering your homework! 
See you on Friday~ 
-T.Jhozel

1. Do you prefer to have many friends or just a few that you are close to?
>>Correct.
I prefer to have just a few friends becase communication with many firends is tired.
>> I prefer to have a small group of close friends because talking to lots of people gets boring.
2. What are the latest trends in your country?
>> Correct.
IN KOREA, handmade hamburger is the latest trend.
>>Correct.
>> OR: The newest trend in Korea is homemade hamburger.
3. What’s the latest news?
>>Correct.
The latest topic is the decrease of apartment price.
>> The current news is the price drop for apartments.

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