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2012-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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2012.03.20 1)Is this your apple? 2)Are you happy? 3)Is your name Josephine? 4)Are the comics old? 5)Is Charlie in your class? 6)Is your sandwich box blue? 7)Are they German? 8)Is the chair red? 9)Am I late? 10) Are the kids clever? Yesterday was my work anniversary. I didn't go to work yesterday. I went to my hometown last Friday and I came to work today morning by train. I spent long weekend. I wanted to go travel but I could not. I prepared the travel to Japan with my mom. But I had a lot to do. I would have a lecture about Israel's history in Saterday and I would go to my friend's housewarming in Sunday. I necessarily canceled my travel. But I had good time last long weekend. My lecture was finished well and I had a chance to take a class with famous speaker. And I met my friends. Actually, we meet too frequent to miss but we had a lot to talk. Anyway, I spent a profitalbe weekend.

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Hello my dear Miss. [Name], thank you so much for mking your composition today.. I missed you a lot!:* Anyway, I\'ll be just talking to you later about your weekend okay? I can\'t wait to have class with you Miss. [Name].. Teacher Cam^^ 2012.03.201)Is this your apple? >>correct 2)Are you happy? >>correct3)Is your name Josephine? >>correct4)Are the comics old? >>correct5)Is Charlie in your class? >>correct6)Is your sandwich box blue? >>correct7)Are they German? >>correct8)Is the chair red? >>correct9)Am I late? >>correct10) Are the kids clever?>>correctYesterday was my work anniversary. >>Yes terday was our anniversary at workplace. >>It was our Anniverysary at work yesterday.I didn\'t go to work yesterday. >>correctI went to my hometown last Friday and I came to work today morning by train. >>I went to my hometown last Friday and I came to work this morning by train.I spent long weekend. >>correctI wanted to go travel but I could not. >>I wanted to go on a travel but I couldn\'t.I prepared the travel to Japan with my mom. >>I prepared a trip to japan with my mom.But I had a lot to do. >>correctI would have a lecture about Israel\'s history in Saterday >>correct (Observe proper spelling SATURDAY)and I would go to my friend\'s housewarming in Sunday. >>And I would go to my friend\'s housewarming on Sunday.I necessarily canceled my travel. >>correct >>I intentionally cancelled my travel.But I had good time last long weekend. >>But I had a good time when I had my long vacation last weekend.My lecture was finished well and I had a chance to take a class with famous speaker. >>My lecture ended well and i got a chance to take a class with a famous speaker.And I met my friends. Actually, we meet too frequent to miss but we had a lot to talk. >>correctAnyway, I spent a profitalbe weekend. >>correct (profitable)

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