Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, T.Donna.
Today, many things happened.
The nursery department manager quitted our clinic after the morning conference.
That\'s because Dr. [Name] asked her if she really want to leave our clinic and then she told him in front of me and other managers that it was right.
After her reply, Dr. [Name] said \"Okay, you can\'t join a manager\'s meeting and education from now on.\"
After a while, she reported a paper of resignation.
In the morning worktime, I could find a memo of some patient\'s chart about language.
\'Korean X\' means he or she can\'t speak Korean.
When I find that memo, I always expect a foreigner who can speaks English.
But, today was not bingo.
He couldn\'t speak English as well.
We talked to each other with facial movements and gestures.
At lunch, Dr. [Name] and I were very hungry, so we ordered the food for 6 people.
We have big stomachs, I suppose. (This is not a Doctor\'s word.)
Anyway, I have no idea about my homework.
If I have enough time, I want to learn about histories.
See you.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Dr. [이름]!
Nowadays, being frank can be so useful because time is so limited and we canno afford to keep people at work who do not want to stay and work together harmoniously. I understand Dr. M.J. and his actions. It\'s harsh but it\'s needed for a fast-growing company just like yours. Do not worry, good members will join you soon.
Well, it is interesting to learn about the non-Korean and non-English patient that you had. You must learn sign language now as well. ^^ Anyway, I am sure you performed the treatment well. I am curious about interesting procedures you perform. I hope you can also share these in class.
Doctors deserve a very good meal all the time. So, never feel guilty about a good meal. Just enjoy eating what you want because you work so hard. Meanwhile, learning something new and useful matters a lot. It fules the mind and makes us more confident when we atlk to other people.
Below, the common grammar comments I made were about proper diction, tense of verb, subject-verb agreement, among others. Kindly take time to go over them.
Have a productive and a happy Wednesday!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
Today, many things happened.
Today, many things happened.
>> Correct!
The nursery department manager quitted our clinic after the morning conference.
>> The nursery department manager quit our clinic after the morning conference.
That\'s because Dr. [Name] asked her if she really want to leave our clinic and then she told him in front of me and other managers that it was right.
>> That\'s because Dr. [Name] asked her if she really wants to leave our clinic and then she told him in front of me and other managers that it was right.
After her reply, Dr. [Name] said \"Okay, you can\'t join a manager\'s meeting and education from now on.\"
>> After her reply, Dr. [Name] said \"Okay, you can\'t join the manager\'s meeting and education from now on.\"
After a while, she reported a paper of resignation.
After a while, she reported a paper of resignation.
>> After a while, she (submitted/ filed) a paper of resignation.
In the morning worktime, I could find a memo of some patient\'s chart about language.
In the morning worktime, I could find a memo of some patient\'s chart about language.
>> Correct!
Or: In the morning worktime, I found a memo of some patient\'s chart about language.
\'Korean X\' means he or she can\'t speak Korean.
\'Korean X\' means he or she can\'t speak Korean.
>> Correct!
When I find that memo, I always expect a foreigner who can speaks English.
>> When I find that memo, I always expect a foreigner who can speak English.
But, today was not bingo.
>> But, today was not a bingo.
He couldn\'t speak English as well.
But, today was not bingo.
>> But, today was not a bingo.
He couldn\'t speak English as well.
>> Correct!
We talked to each other with facial movements and gestures.
>> Correct!
At lunch, Dr. [Name] and I were very hungry, so we ordered the food for 6 people.
>> Correct!
We have big stomachs, I suppose. (This is not a Doctor\'s word.)
>> Correct!
Anyway, I have no idea about my homework.
>> Correct!
If I have enough time, I want to learn about histories.
>> If I have enough time, I want to learn about history.
See you.
>> Correct!
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