homework
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Have you ever visited a society where most people speak more than one language?
Three years ago, I visited france where people speak french and english.
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Hello, Dan!
Thank you for always doing your homework, I appreciate you efforts!
I encourage you to write more and explain more for your next writings. ^^
I encourage you to write more and explain more for your next writings. ^^
Anyway, see you tomorrow!
-T.Jhozel
Have you ever visited a society where most people speak more than one language?
>> Correct.
Three years ago, I visited france where people speak french and english.
>> Three years ago, I visited France, where people speak both French and English.
(Always use capital letters for proper nouns)
(Always use capital letters for proper nouns)
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