homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think that fruits and vegetables are good for your health? Why?
:I think vegetables and fruits are good for our health. Because fruits and vegetables contain a lot of fiber and vitamins that are good for our body.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jordan,
Thank you for sharing your opinion about the question I provided. ^^
Take care and enjoy the holiday with your family!
~ Teacher Gina
I think vegetables and fruits are good for our health. Because fruits and vegetables contain a lot of fiber and vitamins that are good for our body.
>> I think vegetables and fruits are good for our health because fruits and vegetables contain a lot of fiber and vitamins that are good for our bodies.
>> Or: Fruits and vegetables include a lot of fiber and vitamins that are beneficial for our bodies, so I believe that they are great for our health.
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