Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If you were not in the situation you are in now, where would you be?
If I were not in the situation, I would live in another country.
But living another country need a lot of money. Therefore I would only live 1 to 2 years.
강사 첨삭
It is interesting, Emily! I hope you can still explore such life in the future. -Faith-
If you were not in the situation you are in now, where would you be?>> CORRECT
If I were not in the situation, I would live in another country.
>> If I were not in this situation, I would live in another country.
But living another country need a lot of money.
But living another country need a lot of money.
>> However, living in another country needs a lot of money.
Therefore I would only live 1 to 2 years.
>> Therefore, I could only live for one to two years abroad.
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