Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Please explain, \"Health is wealth.\"
We can work and play when we are healthy. We can live the life we want when we are healthy. Money cannot buy health.
강사 첨삭
You are right, Emily! We can never buy good health that is why we have to take good care of it.-Faith-
Please explain, \"Health is wealth.\"
>> CORRECT
We can work and play when we are healthy.
>> CORRECT
We can work and play when we are healthy.
>> CORRECT
We can live the life we want when we are healthy.
>> CORRECT
OR Also, we can live the life we want when we are healthy.
Money cannot buy health.
>> Lastly, money cannot buy health.
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