Homework
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How can you encourage someone who wants to have a healthier lifestyle?
I will send report about healthy to someone who wants to have a healthier lifestyle. Then they will read the report and try to maintain a healthy lifestyle.
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That\'s even better, Emily! Showing proof about good health can definitely encourage someone to maintain a good health.
-Faith-
How can you encourage someone who wants to have a healthier lifestyle?>> CORRECT
I will send report about healthy to someone who wants to have a healthier lifestyle.
I will send report about healthy to someone who wants to have a healthier lifestyle.
>> I will send a report about health to someone who wants to have a healthier lifestyle.
Then they will read the report and try to maintain a healthy lifestyle.
>> Then, they will read the report and try to maintain a healthy lifestyle.
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