homework
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How can you divide your time effectively between work and leisure?
I uaually finish my work first and next time play games or see a movie.
Because doing work is important activity for me.
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-T.Jhozel
How can you divide your time effectively between work and leisure?
>> Correct!
I uaually finish my work first and next time play games or see a movie.
>> I usually finish my work first, then play games or watch a movie.
Because doing work is important activity for me.
>> Correct!>> OR: Because working is an important activity for me.
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