homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What kind of gift would you like to receive? Why?
:What I need right now is a master keyboard, which is a necessary instrument for MIDI (MIDI is short for Musical Instrument Digital Interface) music.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jordan!
I appreciate you for sharing your answer to me. Great job in making your sentence. ^^
I also hope that you will be given a chance to have this instrument so you can further pursue music.
~ Teacher Gina
What I need right now is a master keyboard, which is a necessary instrument for MIDI (MIDI is short for Musical Instrument Digital Interface) music.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: A master keyboard, which is an essential piece of equipment for MIDI (short for Musical Instrument Digital Interface) music, is what I\'m looking for right now
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