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2023-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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What do you think is the most dangerous animal? I think snakes are most dangerous animals. because it has poison. Why do you think that animal is dangerous? because snakes can have poison.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Sharon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

What do you think is the most dangerous animal?
I think snakes are most dangerous animals. 
>> I think snakes are the most dangerous animals. 
because it has poison.
>> That\'s because they have a poison.
OR >> The reason why they\'re dangerous is because they have venom.


Why do you think that animal is dangerous?
because snakes can have poison.
>> It\'s because some snakes have poison.
OR >> They\'re dangerous because some snakes are venomous.

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