homework
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What do you like to do on really cold days?
I like stay at home on really cold days.
What are the best food and drinks to have during the winter season?
My best food is soup bar and I like hot chocolate during the winter season.
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Good day, Sharon!
What are the best food and drinks to have during the winter season?
My best food is soup bar and I like hot chocolate during the winter season.
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
What do you like to do on really cold days?
I like stay at home on really cold days.
I like stay at home on really cold days.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I just keep myself warm at home on really cold days.
What are the best food and drinks to have during the winter season?
My best food is soup bar and I like hot chocolate during the winter season.
>> My best food is soup and I like hot chocolate during the winter season.
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