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What is the best thing about your birthplace?
- The best thing in my birthplace is good public transportation.
I think, The reason is because is close to Seoul.
It is close to Seoul, transportation has improve
So when there are many people, Public transportation is better than car
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What is the best thing about your birthplace?
- The best thing in my birthplace is good public transportation.
- The best thing in my birthplace is good public transportation.
>> The best thing about my birthplace is the good public transportation.
I think, The reason is because is close to Seoul.
>> I think the reason is because it is close to Seoul.
It is close to Seoul, transportation has improve
>> It is close to Seoul, so the transportation has also improved.
So when there are many people, Public transportation is better than car
>> So when there are many people, the public transportation is better to use than cars.
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