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Why do you think more people raise pets nowadays?
It is because people have more time. And raising a pets give people peace of mind.
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I totally agree with the peace of mind that pets usually give, Emily! I hope you can have one later.-Faith-
Why do you think more people raise pets nowadays?>> CORRECT
It is because people have more time.
>> People raise more pets these days because people have more time.
And raising a pets give people peace of mind.
>> Also, raising pets give people peace of mind.
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