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Can someone become a veterinarian without interest in animals? Why or why not?
I think someone who without interests in animals can become a veterinarian. Nowadays veterinarians earn a lot of money. Therefore, some people would be veterinarian for money.
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Well-said, Emily! I also believe that as time goes by, their interest will be developed. -Faith-
Can someone become a veterinarian without interest in animals? Why or why not?>> CORRECT
I think someone who without interests in animals can become a veterinarian.
>> I think someone without interests in animals can still become a veterinarian.
Nowadays veterinarians earn a lot of money.
>> Nowadays, veterinarians earn a lot of money.
Therefore, some people would be veterinarian for money.
>> Therefore, some people could be veterinarians for money.
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