homework
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Please answer the question:
Which part of your childhood do you wish you could change?
When I was child I was scared and afraid to try
So, it\'s a miss that I didn\'t experience
In my current opinion, I want change my personality to active
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Please answer the question:
Which part of your childhood do you wish you could change?
When I was child I was scared and afraid to try
Which part of your childhood do you wish you could change?
When I was child I was scared and afraid to try
>> When I was a child, I was scared of trying something.
OR >> When I was a child, I was afraid of trying something.
So, it\'s a miss that I didn\'t experience
>> So, it\'s a missed opportunity that I didn\'t experience doing something I like.
In my current opinion, I want change my personality to active
>> In my current opinion, I want change my personality to being an active person.
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